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Blessing

(AO2) Responses may include:

  • the poem opens with a vivid depiction of a harsh, dry environment: ‘The skin cracks like a pod’ conveys how scarcity and heat shape human life.

  • metaphors and similes bring the environment to life: water is described as a ‘rush of fortune’ and a ‘blessing’, showing the environment’s transformative power.

  • sensory imagery engages the reader: visual (‘silver crashes’), tactile (‘skin cracks’), auditory (‘the voice of a kindly god’).

  • contrasts highlight human reliance on the environment: the harsh, dry conditions versus the sudden joy brought by water.

  • enjambment and irregular line lengths mirror unpredictability and the rush of water, echoing human reaction.

  • repetition (‘blessing, the voice of a kindly god’) emphasises the overwhelming power of natural forces.

  • the shift in tone from hardship to celebration shows the immediate effect of the environment on human life.

  • free verse reflects the untamed, uncontrolled nature of the environment.

  • personification gives water divine qualities, showing humans perceive their surroundings as miraculous or threatening.

Other Poems for Comparison

(AO2) Responses may include:

  • candidates may choose any poem that explores human interaction with the environment. Suitable options include:

    • War Photographer – Carol Ann Duffy: explores humans in conflict zones; stark imagery (‘fields which don’t explode beneath the feet / of running children’) shows environmental devastation and its effect on humans.

    • Prayer Before Birth – Louis MacNeice: presents a world shaped by oppression and violence; the unborn child anticipates a hostile environment (‘a house of horrors’) influencing human experience.

    • Half-past Two – U A Fanthorpe: the classroom setting and empty school evoke an environment affecting the child’s perception and memory.

    • The Tyger – William Blake: the natural world as powerful and awe-inspiring; imagery of the tiger in the forests of the night shows humans responding to environment with fear and wonder.

    • Piano – D H Lawrence: domestic and musical environment evokes nostalgia, showing humans’ emotional responses to surroundings.

    • Search For My Tongue – Sujata Bhatt: language as cultural environment, influencing human identity and memory.

    • Blessing itself can also be linked to poems about scarcity, abundance, or human dependence on natural resources, such as The Tyger or War Photographer.

  • the environmental conditions are reflected through language, form, and structure: imagery, simile, metaphor, personification, enjambment, free verse, or stanza arrangement.

  • contrasts between poems: for example, scarcity versus abundance, urban versus natural, human awe versus suffering.

  • tone and mood may differ: celebratory in Blessing, sombre or reflective in War Photographer, fearful in The Tyger, or contemplative in Prayer Before Birth.

Both Poems

(AO2 & AO3) Responses may include:

  • both poems show humans affected by their surroundings, though the response may be joy, awe, fear, or suffering.

  • both use imagery, metaphor, and personification to link human experience with the environment.

  • form and structure enhance meaning: free verse mirrors unpredictability in Blessing, regular stanzas or line lengths may contrast with a hostile or chaotic environment in the other poem.

  • both explore human vulnerability and dependence on external forces.

  • comparative links: diction, tone, imagery, structure, and rhythm demonstrate how humans interact with and respond to environments.

(AO3) Responses may include:

  • both poems can be linked through theme: how humans are shaped, affected, or controlled by the environment.

  • candidates may compare immediacy of experience (Blessing) with reflection or critique (War Photographer, Prayer Before Birth, The Tyger).

  • similarities and differences in human response: joy, awe, fear, suffering, or moral reflection.

  • context may enhance understanding: urban scarcity in Blessing, war zones in War Photographer, divine creation in The Tyger.

  • comparisons of poetic techniques: imagery, metaphor, personification, enjambment, repetition, line length, and tone.

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